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Attack of the Goobren

 part 3

The city loomed large and outlandish out of the gloom. Jayden, battle scarred and heroic as he was, felt confused and uncertain of which way to go. He knew he had to keep moving, but his instincts seemed to be failing him, in light of the forbidding city.

One Response to “Attack of the Goobren”

  1. What gorgeous word choices! I love the relative clause ‘battle scarred and heroic as he was’.

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