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The Adventures of the Sky Ship part 3 by Jasmine

“AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH” screamed Bob “calm down” said Lilly wishing that Bob wasn’t so easily frightened, “let’s go and look what it is” and before Bob could stop her, she was out of the cave without any hesitation. Bob grabbed a torch and ran to catch up with her “wait” but when they got to the lake it had gone “where did the shadow go” panted Lilly. They both stood looking around as the wind began to howl.  

One Response to “The Adventures of the Sky Ship part 3 by Jasmine”

  1. This is really good. I like the end bit-They both stood looking around as the wind began to howl. Maybe you could use some exclamation marks.

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