An invisibility clock (made buy unicorn nails) so that I can sneak around.
A walkie talkie ( made by elves) so I can communicate home if I find potions.
A stick so that I can attack anything dangerous.
A shield ( made by elf wood) to protect myself from any potions.
A container so I can bring potions home.
Clothes (made by whales) to keep warm!
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1) Your post is really good and you have very unique ideas.
2) what gave you the idea of a witches caravan?
3) To make it even better you could add in extra information to each part to give more detail.
1) I really enjoyed reading about what made each object.
2) How did you come up with the elf wood and the shield?
3) To make it even better you could check your spelling of by and buy and when to use them.
1) I like the the random things you’ve added for different objects.
2) What’s your favourite animal out of all of them in the text?
3) Maybe you could add more?
I really like the way you add extra information about what they’re made from!
Why did you choose whales for the clothes?
To make this even better, you could add some different things that are a bit unusual.