James’s adventure…
James raced towards the gate, anticopating his decisions. Lumps appeared inside his throat as he noticed that he had made a huge mistake…
He pelted his rope and watched it fall continously from the skyship. he had to find a safe place to sleep, but he couldn’t sleep on the skyship, not with the evil sky pirates…
Hi! gripping me into the tale! i love it :). next time maybe leave it on a cliff hanger. well done!
That’s an piece of work and I think all your describing words are great keep up the good work.