Six Things Found In My Backpack
Extra clothes(which can help me when I fall) and if I get mud all over me.
Books,that can have more than one hundred pages, so that I learn more about wild
creatures and how to defeat them.
A camera that captures wild animals (not a lot of people know about it) so I bring it back as a clue that they actually exist.
An umbrella,which can protect me from squally wind and rain, to make sure I do not get
wet or hit by a strong wind.
A walky talky, which I can use to call my familyfriends, so that I tell them what is
going on.
A magical basket,that will help me get food quickly, instead of having to to hunt my food
Everywhere in my backpack.
Kyron (S) Hallsville Primary School
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