We had just been attacked by a dragon. The fight was tough but we won now we are repairing the ship the old girl felt heavier than normal. We looked down in the ropes there was an egg it was coloured red and purple we took it to the captain. We suggested we should keep it as a pet the captain said yes after a couple of months it hatched and we kept it as a pet.
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Wow that’s a fantastic piece of writing keep up the good work.
It is very good, I bet the baby dragon is so cute, but the only thing is, it doesn’t describe what the baby dragon looks like. I suggest that you add in a bit of a description.
Erin BSJ
Well Done!! This is a fantastic story. I suggest maybe just add a bit more description as I would love to know what the baby dragon looks like.
Ava St Joseph’s hoghton
1. Love the description I really like ‘it was tough but we won.’
2. Maybe add some more detail to what it hatch into.
3. What happened to egg? What dragon came out?