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Stargazer

I bet You have gone on a sky ship adventure when there is clear sky’s and the sun is shinning. Seeing the field down bellow letting the breeze hit your face. Enjoy a lovely ride across the bay to see distant relatives. Once you have landed you will be able to relax for serval weeks.

Although to sun mite be nice why not try a trip in the winter winds sharp in your face. When the thunder leaps at you like a canon  or a lighting strike bring the ship down. Also when the engines falters.  That’s what make the ride scary.

Soon people say they’ve seen pirates hiding in the cloud waiting to destroy. You would probable don’t believe this but its is said that there has been flying beast with claws that can tear apart the the best well made balloons in all the world.

Gripping the railing Archie was shaking in his shoes. He gulped us he engulfed smoke from the engines. He look over he should to she that he two sister were enjoying this life time opportunity. The ship lurched from side to side. They had left the home town to weeks ago and are now passing over low land and sea like water but this storm had blown then of Couse.

At that moment something started to flying toward as. Its have a dragon! Archie saw three of then coming out a storm cloud toward the stargazer. Captain Bob did a sharp turn to one side. He drove to ship at max speed.

A moment later, the Stargazer dipped below the clouds as air seeped out of the balloon and the engines stilled. They drifted down, buffeted from side to side by the storm. Ty and Mariana stared up, searching for the dragons. Had they managed to evade to them?

2 Responses to “Stargazer”

  1. This has a good plot, but the transitions don’t work too well.

  2. Lovely vocab! But you haven’t really spelt them correctly. Next time, you could check your work for spelling mistakes.

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