The shock
Ty and Mariana went back to the ship and set the baby fluff dragon on Mariana’s bunk and put some bread in front of the baby dragon “there you go fluff.” After a while fluffy (the fluff dragon) had fallen asleep. Suddenly there was a thump thump thump Mariana crossed her fingers hoping it wasn’t fluff’s mum or dad. They ran out onto the deck and gripped onto the rails as hard as they could. Then they was a scrape on the bottom of the airship what was that they wondered “don’t worry it is just the rhino from the village” said Mariana happily when she had realised of course. they headed back to there bunk to go to bed and after a couple of minutes they were fast asleep.
Its was amazing you remembered all your capital letter’s for name’s commer’s and full stop’s and you also got all your spelling’s right! I would rate this a 10/10 i don’t have any next step’s for you at all!