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airship tradgey

Jacob and Matthew   watched as a time bomb blew up there ship  suddenly, they fell off but at the last second a devil and rock unicorn  picked them up . but  out of nowhere  a bomb appeared  and killed the devil unicorn   it was dead.     They   got a soft landing but Jacob watched in horror because his left leg wasn’t there. They  were in the mouth of a dinosaur.   Matthew saw 3 things  yucky flesh  horrible spit and scary dead bodies. The  two looked around behind them were sharp,ugly teeth and a  tongue like a bunch of blood. suddenly they saw something.

One Response to “airship tradgey”

  1. Hi Matthew and Jacob! I really like this piece of writing. Do you like writing pieces of writing like this? When you wrote “Matthew and Jacob watched as the time bomb blew up there ship” You wrote the wrong there. Instead it needed to be their.
    I love the last sentence! Just remember a capital letter for suddenly and a comma after suddenly! I love that you used dinosaurs! From Ava SWW!

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