The wizard tamer
Do you want to tame dragons? Well, this is your opportunity to get the job. This is the rewards you will get
the jobs you will have to do
protect the village
Tame dragons
patrol the village
and this is the rewards you will get
100k money
sacks of berry’s
lots of water
breakfast for free
private house
You will be the best the best dragon tamer if you apply. So, what are you waiting for? Apply to be the best protecter and the tamer master
But when you apply you must pay 10 dollars to enter. So, this is your chance to enter if you do apply you will be famous and the richest person in the world! And you will be the king of the kingdom and you are the best so this is your chance to apply or don’t this will end in 1 day. Like I said YOU will be famous you will be richest of all you will rule our kingdom and rule the world so you must enter. And you will be called the tamer dragon master of the kingdom.
Hi Aaron. This is a good piece of writing and your but comment is very good as builds suspence.
Have you read your story out loud and got someone else to check because it will definitely help?
To make this bit of writing even better try not to keep repeating the same words and add a bit more detail to your points (like the rewards) to make it sound even more intriguing than it already is.
I enjoyed reading, well done!
This is a really good piece of writing. Well done!
My question is: Was there another dragon taming person that had the job?
To male this even better you could do a co-long to add suspense. Great job!