The demonic dragon
The demonic dragon is fierce and strong.
He is a vast red golden dragon.
With sharp teeth like a knights sword, his wings are like glass
His eyes are red like blood his scales are as purple as blueberry.
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Hi Atene!
1. I love how you`ve magpied ‘vast red golden dragon’ from the hobbit text!
2. Did you say ‘his wings are like glass’ to say that they are smooth?
3. Maybe you could add a comma in between ‘blood’ and ‘his’ ?