Exciting events in my life
I have never won a game of football at the wonderful World Cup, but I have won a game of football on the standard school playground.
I have traveled to Rio de Janiro, but I have traveled to Chester Zoo with its beautiful animal.
I have never spoke to someone in Morse Code which is as hard as learning a new language, but i have tried to speak Spanish which seems impossible.
I have never seen the Mona Lisa, but I have painted a super, spectacular self portrait in art class.
I have never danced with the trees of the Black Forest, but I have danced with my friends to have a laugh.
I have never pierced my rough, red ears, but I have grazed my elbow by falling off my bike.
I have never had a kitten as cute as a cuddly bear, but I have stroked cousins contented dog.
I have never jumped off Niagra falls, but I have jumped off a diving board in Spain.
I have never driven a ferocious Ferrari, but I have driven a small, spectacular RC car.
I think this is a good piece of writing and I like how you’ve compared it to what you have done and what’s hard to do. I think that you could use some more ambitious vocabulary next time. Other than that I think that this is a very good piece of writing.