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Chapter 1 – The Emporium

Chapter 1

The Emporium

 

Ian was walking down the street and saw a mysterious chapel. Strange, thought Ian. I don’t think that was there before…

Ian crossed the road and tried the door. It was locked, but the door was still creaking. “This must be very old!” Ian said to himself. Suddenly, it started raining so Ian wondered of home

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The next day, Ian came back to the chapel, but it wasn’t there. Well, wasn’t in the same place. Instead of being next to the graveyard, it was now next the the ice-cream shop. “VERY STRANGE!” exclaimed Ian. He tried to open the door, and this time, it creeked open. Ian crept inside and started hearing weird noises. The chapel then started to crumble and Ian ran outside. As it stopped, he glimpsed floating objects and went inside. The plaster and brick that fell off the roof was gently floating back to the roof “OH GOD!!” shouted Ian, freaking out. “Who’s there!?” shouted a voice. Ian spied a gemstone, took it and ran off. “I wished I was back home!” said Ian and he was suddenly back home. “Srange…” said Ian. “I wish I had a lollipop…” Suddenly, a lollipop appeared in his hand.

 

2 Responses to “Chapter 1 – The Emporium”

  1. I really liked this. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I can’t say anything to improve it. I was just wondering what is the name of a chaple of is it just a chaple?

  2. Maggie + Tamsyn May 27, 2021 at 11:18 am

    1.positive a well thought story and imaginative
    2. Question What made you thing of a lollipop at the end?
    3. Improvement Check spellings

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