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charlie and the chocclate factory

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In a village was an 11 year old boy called Charlie. His family was poor and his family was living with his grandpa, grandmother, dad, mom, brothers and sisters. The house was too small and the family couldn’t live comfortably and Charlie’s dad didn’t have enough money to buy a new house.

One day, Charlie went  in to a shop for some grossly when he was coming in the house outside a shop was a TV he saw in the TV   a “man was saying if you found  the golden  ticket you have a chance to go in a magical land and this golden  are only 3 of them you need to find i other chocolate packets  ” when charlie comes in the house he didn’t talk about the golden ticket chance because he knows if he talk his mom and dad never give him dollars to buy a chocolate, one day charlie ask his mom to have some money to buy a chocolate when his mom give money he go in the shop to buy a chocolate when he open the chocolate he didn’t found the golden ticket he return in the home sadly tomorrow was his birthday  when woke up his family surprise him with a small cake and some money after celebrating the birthday charlie go i the shop and he wants to try another time to find a golden 

 ticket when he opened the chocolate he can’t believe he founded the golden ticket he was  too happy near him was some man who has seen charlie found golden 

 ticket he say to charlie give me golden 

 ticket i will bw give 25,000 dollars and the other man was saying no give to me i will be give you 35,000 dollars the shopkeeper tell to charlie take the golden ticket and ran at home, and charlie was running fast he can when charlie arrived at home and tell to his family all the family was really happy.

On the other side there was remained 2 golden tickets, there was 10 year old girl called maya ,  his family was too much rich in his family was maya’s dad and mom , when the golden 

 ticket news arrived to Maya’s family Maya’s dad buy 1,000 chocolate boxes to have the golden ticket the servant who Maya’s family give the job to open the boxes and find the golden 

 ticket there was 60 servant to open the boxes and find golden 

 ticket one of the servant find the golden ticket and she try to escape with the golden 

 ticket but Maya’s dad catches the servant when she was escaping , Maya’s dad comes home and surprises Maya with the golden ticket.

Now there is only 1 golden ticket and 5 day left to go to the magical land.

And there was 11 year old boy called karl his family was too much rich in his family live karl’s mom and dad, Karl’s dad and Maya’s dad was good friend , Karl’s dad have there own chocolate factory and this is because it was easy to find the  golden 

 ticket  Karl’s  dad starr to find the golden 

 ticket but he could’n find it after 4 days was remained only 1 day to go in the magical and and one day Karl’s dad was searching the golden ticket for Karl so he can go is well in the magical land  finally Karl’s dad founded the golden  ticket  Karl’s dad go on in the house and give the golden ticket to Karl.

In the next day Charlie,Maya and Karl have to go in the magical land, Karl and Maya was friend but he don’t know who is it Charlie and why is to poor, finally The man comes to open the magical land gate the man who open the want say to the three kids the man say to three kids if you cross the magical land and you reach the finish yuo will be won 50,000 dollars the three was too excited to won 50,000 dollars and few moment later the three kids go in the magical land, in the magical land was a lot of rides a lot of chocolate a lot of sweets the three kids need to search silver key to open the second stage gate Charlie,Maya and Karl start to search the silver key a few moment later Maya fall into a cave, Charlie say to Karl “do you have a rope to pull him from the cave” Karl said “No i don’t have a rope” accidently Karl found a magic rope who can go infinity time long Charlie and Karl start to pull Maya from the Maya found the silver key from the cave after exit from the cave they opened the second stage gate now finally they are in the second stage now they need to find the flying  ball , Charlie see the flying ball in the inside roof in the room was a big stair Karl go on the stairs and start to take the flying ball finally he take the flying ball and comes down the stair Karl need to aim in the gate’s lock and try to destroy the lock with the flying ball the flying ball is heavy after destroying the gate’s lock he pass at the third  stage who is the last stage of the magical land and this stage is gonna be difficult , in the last stage is a parkour if you fall in in the parkour you will be burn from the fire the parkour was no long was short but dangerous they started to do the parkour in the first jump is was easy in the second jump accidentally Charlie was falling in and Karl grab his hand and pull him up and this was the last jump but there was not parkour there was 2 doors in the first door was water and in the second door was lava they need to choose which one they need to go one of the liquid will fire you and the second liquid will be the safe and you will be won 50,000 dollars Maya and karl said “this one is easy is water because lava will be fire you and water is safe” Charlie said “don’t forgot this is a magical land i will be go in the lava and this can be lava is water but water is lava” Charlie go in the lava because he think is the safe one but Karl and Maya go on the water one because he think is the safe one, Maya and Karl lose the and he didn’t get the 50,000 dollars and Charlie won and he get the 50,000 dollars because Charlie was right this is why he won. 

 

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