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monkey swinging

I want to paint the smell of  A Sunday dinner  cooking  in the oven whilst  I sit on the floor playing monopoly with my dad.I want to paint the sound of music playing on the loud ,crazy radio.I can paint the memory of when I first  started  writing  as A  four year old.

One Response to “monkey swinging”

  1. I think that is a really good part because it is very interesting and very detailed, why would choose monkey swinging as the title you make this better by adding a bit more detail about what happens after the poem.

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