monkey swinging
I want to paint the smell of A Sunday dinner cooking in the oven whilst I sit on the floor playing monopoly with my dad.I want to paint the sound of music playing on the loud ,crazy radio.I can paint the memory of when I first started writing as A four year old.
I think that is a really good part because it is very interesting and very detailed, why would choose monkey swinging as the title you make this better by adding a bit more detail about what happens after the poem.