4 Responses to “I have never ridden the sun”

  1. I love the actions you have included!
    Adam and Valentino, St Edward’s Darwen

  2. Well done for the great work, I really liked it.
    What type of tree did you climb?
    I would suggest typing up a bit more.
    ( Alfie 10, Harry 11)

  3. its good but you could have added more sentences

  4. I think that it it is good and if I could I would give you 1 house points WELL DONE 👏 .
    I also liked how first you did a dream and then next you did something that really happened .

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