On my way home
On my way home,
I met a man called green .
His hear was as green as grass
and his eyes are like green apples .
He smelt like kiwi
and green grapes
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I like It.You did spell hair wrong but other than that it’s amazing.
I like it, you spelt hair wrong though.You could maybe add a bit more description.(this is how you spell it hair.)
Well done willow. You really try hard. Maybe next time you can write a bit more. And there was one or two spelling mistakes