The Story
I met a girl called Sun.
Her skin was as orange as an orange
And she wore a crown that glittered like a huge big ruby in the sunlight,
She sang the most amazing rhyming melody’s with her soft and calming voice
I met a wolf called Strike
His coat was as white as snow
And his eyelashes had snowflakes threw them,
The personality of this wolf was hyper and fun nothing like his packmates.
I met a girl called Noel
She was dressed in the most jolly outfit
Her eyes twinkled like rainbow lights on a Christmas tree,
And every time she spoke it felt like she was singing a Christmas carol.
Wonderful work but not sure if your supposed to put a comma after every sentence except the last?otherwise great work 🙂