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The Story

I met a girl called Sun.

Her skin was as orange as an orange

And she wore a crown that glittered like a huge big ruby in the sunlight,

She sang the most amazing rhyming melody’s with her soft and calming voice

 

I met a wolf called Strike

His coat was as white as snow

And his eyelashes had snowflakes threw them,

The personality of this wolf was hyper and fun nothing like his packmates.

 

I met a girl called Noel

She was dressed in the most jolly outfit

Her eyes twinkled like rainbow lights on a Christmas tree,

And every time she spoke it felt like she was singing a Christmas carol.

One Response to “The Story”

  1. Wonderful work but not sure if your supposed to put a comma after every sentence except the last?otherwise great work 🙂

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