The bird and the boy
The house Peter had hit was Dan’s Dads house.The garden had dead flowers and the grass was really long. They went inside and the door slammed shut behind them. The house was empty so they had a look aroud and found a computer next to the bed.
Dan saw the screen was on and tried to find the password to the computer. He looked around and he finally found the password on a piece of paper under the bed. He typed the password and it turned on but the computer didn’t recognise him and shut down “No please don’t turn off,”Dan shouted. The door opened and someone came in the house as the door slammed shut Peter flew out the window and Dan hid in the wardrobe
Amazing but don’t do a capital letter on speech unless it’s at the start of the sentence.