It could be,
the town hall underneath a small,
soft breeze as the sun hid behind the blankets of trees,
it could be Ashley park at full moon as the sizzling fireworks
Shone across the land.
It could be,
The crispy, crunch leaves fall under my feet as the weather
turns dark and gloomy showering Down, drenching every flower,
The rain sheds like your tears,
No need to cry when your upset or hide like the sun,
Be confident and be yourself.
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I like how you haven’t repeated the same words over and over again.What did you mean when you put ‘Don’t cry when your upset,or hide like the sun?’Maybe chides better title next time and better theme other then tear’s because then you win’t always be using the word tears.Well done it was really good.
I loved reading this blog post.
Well done! I thought it was good, but what do you mean when you said don’t hide like the Sun?
I think you should improve on the name choice as it does not really match the poem itself.
Overall, it was really good. Keep up the good work!