The fire dragon
Eyes like a black Beed small and still looking at its prey.
The scaly skin is rough like a smashed piece of glass.
The dragon grinds the leftover rat and slurps up there tail.
teeth sharp like a piece of glass cutting through your skin.
Tongue wet and scaly like its rough back.
Dry rough and scaly like a pile of lumpy rocks.
Bumpy back of the dragonet’s spine bends around .
Wings black and red like red raw meat.
As sharp as broken glass cutting into your skin.
Claws that rip through a tree like an axe.
I like the way you have described the back, tongue and teeth it shows you have a great imagination-Kate SJF Widnes