DEATH DRAGON
In the deep dark wood
lives a crimson red
dragon with scales as
boney as starved children
with chicken pocks as
yellow as the sun .Red
spikes as red as a blood.
Black and orange wings
yellow stomach as yellow
as a sunflower.Teath
as sharp as a knife
stabing right though butter.
A tale as long as a large tree trunk.
Wings as big as the world.
Toe nailes as green as the greenest leaf.
Hello Bethany I like how you have used alliteration in your first sentence. You could improve by adding a few similes.