To mother
Dear mother
Today we went to our new school. It’s called Ashton primary. We been learning maths history a bunch. We also went to the park we had a fun time.
We also went to the shop. Then we built a den. It was the size of a elephant! And we ate popcorn.
We had a very fun time see you soon!
From: Jayden.
It is a very good diary maybe you can put more writing on the page but I like it a lot still.