Wednesday 15th June 2022

LO: I am learning to write an atmospheric setting and introduce suspense. 

Chapter 2 – the adventure of a lifetime

With no time to lose, they got all of their belongings packed up because a little birdy told them that the nasty Gorm was on their trail. Waking Peak up would be a tough job as it was dawn (sunrise). The first thing that they did when they got outside was check the map to find their next place to go to. On the map they had found a place called Kite’s Castle. They had always been told never to go there but on the map they had marked all the places the Gorm had gone to and this was one of the only places they hadn’t been.

Unfortunately, it had taken hours to even make it three quarters of the way. It would not be far from Peak being asleep so they would have to get there faster and when they got there they would have to find a place to go to for the night because it was getting really late at this point. When they had got there they had not expected the castle to be that ginormous so it was going to be even harder to find a spot to hide. But finally they had found a place which was not the best but it would do. All they wanted to do was get out of that misty nasty weather.

The place that they had found was a dungeon  , which is a place where if you were bad you would be put . They went inside through a small tunnel. Inside, Piekin and Pud were talking about how they hoped their mother was ok. Outside, the wind was howling. They could hear a piano being played in the distance. Only one candle was lit in there so it must not have been long after something or someone had been in there. That was not even the scariest bit, there were handcuffs and battered furniture. They were very scared. They fell asleep quite  hellllate because they were worried about their mother.

Once they had woken up they heard forceful footsteps….