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In the dead of the night, Barry packed his bag. He packed: a coat to keep him warm in the stormy night; a surfboard (which he had for three years now) to ride the waves and a wetsuit. As he opened the cobweb-infested door, he heard the pounding waves crashing onto the coast. Barry considered for a moment; his family slept peacefully. He had two choices turn around and go back or stay. He knew this could be fatal what should he do…
I like the way you started your paragraph with ‘in the dead of the night’.
Why has he packed a wet suit and a surfboard?
You could add a little bit more description of where he is.