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In the dead of the night, Barry packed his bag. He packed: a coat to keep him warm in the stormy night; a surfboard (which he had for three years now) to ride the waves and a wetsuit. As he opened the cobweb-infested door, he heard the pounding waves crashing onto the coast. Barry considered for a moment; his family slept peacefully. He had two choices turn around and go back or stay. He knew this could be fatal what should he do…

One Response to “Blogging Activity”

  1. I like the way you started your paragraph with ‘in the dead of the night’.
    Why has he packed a wet suit and a surfboard?
    You could add a little bit more description of where he is.

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