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PEARLS BLOG CHALLENGE

NEGATIVE

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the shop window , the cold wind swept across the dull town. Cars purred by and on the promenade , discarded papers tumbled along , driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the abandoned lonely beach , crashing against the uneven rocks that fringed the frozen shoreline .

POSITIVE

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the new shop window , the warm refreshing wind swept across the happy ,cheerful countryside. Cars purred by and on the promenade, colourful fish and chip papers tumbled along ,driven by the wind . The sea rolled up the bright welcoming beach , crashing against the soft rocks that  fringed the luxurious  shoreline .

Week 8 Blog Challenge

  1. Barry stared at the burger. Outside the restaurant window, a wind swept across the misty town. Cars roared by and on the promenade, black papers tumbled along, driven by the cold wind. The sea rolled up the grey beach, crashing against the inky rocks that fringed the isolated shoreline.
  2. Barry stared at the burger. Outside the hotel window, a wind swept across the sunny town. Cars purred by and on the promenade bright papers tumbled along ,driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the golden beach, crashing against the grey rocks that fringed the yellow shoreline.

 

 

 

 

Blog Challenge

Barry stared at the delicious burger. Outside the shiny, clean window, a calm wind swept across the glamorous village. Cars purred by and on the promenade, major newspapers tumbled along, driven by the warm peaceful wind. The sea rolled up the picturesque, sandy beach crashing against the tall rocks that fringed the dazzling shoreline.

Barry stared at the unappetising burger. Outside the shattered window a powerful, freezing wind swept across the isolated village. Cars purred on the promenade, discarded newspapers tumbled along, driven by the cold wind. The sea rolled up the abandoned lonely beach crashing against the gloomy rocks      that fringed the deserted shoreline.

last blog

Barry stared at the burger. outside the crakeled window ,a wind swept across the deppresing town. Cars purred by and on the promenade , crumbled paper tumbled along .

Blog 10

Barry looked at the burger. Outside the slimy window ,a wind swept across the lonely town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, discarded papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the littered beach, crashing against the croaked rocks that fringed the ugly shoeline.

Positive/Negative writing task

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the black-stained window, a wind swept across the eerie town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, old criminal record papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the isolated beach, crashing against the edged rocks that fringed the wrecked shoreline.

 

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the freshly cleaned window, a wind swept across the crowded town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, chip papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the packed beach, crashing against the smooth rocks that fringed the parched shoreline.

The seaside

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the shattered window, a wind swept across the ruined town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, burnt papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the isolated beach, crashing against the sinister-looking rocks that fringed the gloomy shoreline.

 

Barry stared at the juicy burger. Outside the polished window, a wind swept across the bright town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, colourful confetti blew along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the white, sandy beach, crashing against the glinting rocks that fringed the bustling shoreline.

BLOG CHALLENGE

Negative:

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the creaky window, a gush of wind swept across the old, dark town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, old papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the dark beach, crashing against the mouldy rocks that fringed the abandoned shoreline.

Positive:

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the shiny window, a gush of wind swept across the crowded town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, vibrant coloured papers tumbled along, driven by the fresh breath of air. The sea rolled up the sandy beach, crashing against the outstanding rocks that fringed the stunning shoreline.

Negative and positive mood.

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the blacked out window, a wind swept across the grubby town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, littered papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the gravelly beach, crashing against the serrated rocks that fringed the desolate shoreline.

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the effervescent window, a wind swept across the sunny town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, fish and chip papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the sandy, sultry beach, crashing against the radiant rocks that fringed the crowded shoreline.

blog 10

Barry stared at the burger.  Outside the crooked window a wind swept across the dead town.  Cars purred by on the promenade, ancient wrinkled papers tumbled along driven by the wind.  The sea rolled up the rocky beach, crashing against the massive rocks that fringed the eroding shoreline.

 

Barry stared at the burger.  Outside the shiny window a wind swept across the busy town.  Cars purred by on the promenade, colourful papers tumbled along driven by the wind.  The sea rolled up the sandy golden beach crashing against the smooth rocks that fringed the beautiful shoreline.