NEGATIVE

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the shop window , the cold wind swept across the dull town. Cars purred by and on the promenade , discarded papers tumbled along , driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the abandoned lonely beach , crashing against the uneven rocks that fringed the frozen shoreline .

POSITIVE

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the new shop window , the warm refreshing wind swept across the happy ,cheerful countryside. Cars purred by and on the promenade, colourful fish and chip papers tumbled along ,driven by the wind . The sea rolled up the bright welcoming beach , crashing against the soft rocks that  fringed the luxurious  shoreline .