To use a range of punctuation

As the water slammed against the rocks it sprayed upwards whist the rest of the water flowed into the darkness. The moment the blood moon came out the water went like crazy and engulfed the small sand bank, and created stronger waves and current. At 19:13 there was a wave the size of an average door. Then for a moment there was silence. Soon you could hear almost nothing not a ripple not a sound.

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