Dear Wonder girl ,

I am writing to persuade you to help me make the world a better place . my first reason is that people don’t   respect each other and people are not   peace makers .I would also like add that people keep on kidnapping children each day .Further , more ,I am concerned that if you don’t come to our town children will vanish and maybe there will be no more children making the world a better place .To build on this concern I would like you to come as fast as you can to save the children . I would like to point out that towns that have local super heroes have no children vanishing.On the other the other hand ,many people argue that if you come here you might  take away their slaves .some people claim that  you are not the right super hero for this job but we believe that you can help us.

Thank you for reading my letter I hope you come to our town 

By Clare