Inside my backpack…
Inside my backpack…
There are a pair of snazzy shoes, with the wings of a Pegasus, to make me flutter through the air.
There is Henry VIII’s axe, used to slice off Anne Boleyn’s head, to end the carnage between the flipper-flappers and the groggle-boggles (the greatest sky enemies).
There is Cinderella’s glass slipper to use as bribery, luring the sky-beasts away from their mountains of gold.
There is every single chocolate bar from Willy Wonka’s factory, delicately laid.
There is a bucket-full of hope, to pour over lost souls.
There is Medusa’s head, to turn enemies into rust busts, to hang as decoration on my skyship.
There is a penguin, with a button nose, who is specially trained in martial-arts, and an illuminated candle, that has the power to reveal the truth.
There is an endless supply of the Queen of Hearts’ finest jam tarts.
There is the love a mother gives, wrapped up with a red bow, to keep me strong.
Then, finally, there is a snow globe, with the memories of my family sealed in the glass sphere: protecting my childhood dreams from murderous enemies outside
Very good and like the familiarisation in your poem.
Wow, I love this, well done! Very imaginative – Joshua Seigal http://www.joshuaseigal.co.uk
We love this poem, Rosie. The extra detail you have added to each item really elevates it. My favourite line is, “There is a bucket-full of hope, to pour over lost souls.” The image of saving lost souls with your bucketful of hope resonates with me. Keep up the great work! – John
Rosie, you have really stretched your imagination with this. I loved it. Keep writing poems, you have talent. http://www.brianmoses.co.uk/
Where did you get the idea of a ‘bucketful of hope’ from?
I really like it. The love of a mother is really interesting. Maybe you could add an adverb to the winged shoes?
Amazing! well done love your choice of words. – Sophie THS
Well done! I found it amazing. My favourite line is there are a pair of snazzy shoes, I found than fun to read.
Charlotte TJS