The Chocomander:

Prologue

My name is Hajra Syeda and I work at a local museum in Barking, and we do treasure hunts in the holidays and afterschool. If you finish the treasure hunt, by finding all the objects, then you will be rewarded with a chocolate coin. We also do face painting on Saturday. We tell them as well about the history of Barking and we also show them how the homes looked 150 years ago compared to how it looks now . There are also  many activities for kids and adults , such as play areas ,all so many sites to go and visit,and a summer and winter club that you can join any time .Have a wonderful day.        

First Paragraph:     

My name is Hajra Syeda but most people call me Hajra. I work in the Barking Museum and I take care of all the stuff we need and all the stuff we already have . in the holidays we do treasure hunts every day we don’t miss a single days sometimes we also do it in school day and also after school if you find all the things then you will be rewarded with a chocolate coin .We also do funfairs on every Saturdays what includes face painting , rides ,berry picking and trampolines what you can jump on all it costs is 5 pound for the fun fair what also includes food . Most people tell me that I deserve a better job and some people offered me a job but I declined the offer because I love my job . I live in a small cottage with one room, a small bathroom and a tiny kitchen. I saw a boy he was shaking the gates it was closing time I froze not knowing what to do he shouts      

“ help me I’m in danger help “     “ The Chocomander I saw it” He muttered ….