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IMAGE POEM

The parrots wings are,

As colourfull as a shining rainbow,

Like a range of different gemstones,

In an old cave,

 

The night sky is,

As dark as a midnight black cat,

Like a piece of coal,

In a blazing bonfire,

 

A star is,

As sparkly as a pearl in a galaxy,

Like the sun shining,

On the teal blue ocean,

 

A cloud is,

As fluffy as a feather pillow,

Like a cuddly teddy bear,

Resting on a mountain of wool.

One Response to “IMAGE POEM”

  1. Well done Thea!
    But when u say midnight, black cat you need a comma.
    when u said in a galaxy, you would probably say on the galaxy.
    Teal, blue needs a comma as it is an expanded noun phrase.
    Other than that, it is really good overall xx
    Molly

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