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The parrots wings are,
As colourfull as a shining rainbow,
Like a range of different gemstones,
In an old cave,
The night sky is,
As dark as a midnight black cat,
Like a piece of coal,
In a blazing bonfire,
A star is,
As sparkly as a pearl in a galaxy,
Like the sun shining,
On the teal blue ocean,
A cloud is,
As fluffy as a feather pillow,
Like a cuddly teddy bear,
Resting on a mountain of wool.
Well done Thea!
But when u say midnight, black cat you need a comma.
when u said in a galaxy, you would probably say on the galaxy.
Teal, blue needs a comma as it is an expanded noun phrase.
Other than that, it is really good overall xx
Molly