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Session 8 – using conjunctions,determiners and cohesion.

Long ,long ago early in the morning In a strange,little cottage lying next to a rock pool ,Polly found the most beautiful shell she bent down to pick up the shell. Luckily at that moment the shell said “I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely” polly was happy. to her amazement, she had ever seen a shell speak,

 

Early one morning in a strange little cottage there was a poor girl who lived next to the beach (which glistened in the sun ) at that moment Polly bent down to pick up the shell and delicate thin shells lying next to the rock pool Polly found the most beautiful shell Polly was happy luckily, she had found beautiful flat shells, curved coloured shells to her amazement the shell spoke “i will grant you two wishes so choose wisely!”she had never seen, the shell spoke. 

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