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Blog Challenge Session 3

When Bob ran down the road he fell over, so he started crying.

The thundered roared, so the hobbits hid because they were frightened.

Bilbo slept in a cave, but the goblins still attacked.

Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole because the cart came to a wheezing halt.

Jim was interested in the idea, so he rang his friends.

Owls are nocturnal, so this means they are active at night and have excellent eyesight.

 

Session 4 blog challenge by Erin

The snow fell, while Tom waited. He was in the flat when the phone rang. He picked it up, so he could listen. He picked up the suitcase and paced across the room. Then he opened the door and sprinted outside.

Since there was a snake there I took my time.

Whenever there was a bad smell I bought a few gas mask.

a journey to starbucks land

 

I would take a cute kitten [cute but fierce] to scratch out your eyes like 

dish soap stinging your eyes.

 

I would take a prickly super starbucks voucher plant[looks poor  and messy but is very expensive] to pay for starbucks like a little rich girl spending every penny her dad gave her.

 

I would take a bubbling bubble tea maker [looks full of sugar but very healthy] to drink if i don’t want starbucks like a baby pushing away all of its vegetables

 just to get to the sweets.

 

I would take flaming food [looks odd but is very yummy] to eat different food like a lion scoffing down meat.

 

I would take a special starbucks 

cup, seems odd but you won’t regret, to have infinity refill like a 

Tank of water that’s never empty.

 

I would take fashionable clothes [magical but scary] so i don’t have to wear the same clothes every day like a homeless man with only one set of clothes to wear every year.

 

I would take luxurious lip balm [so my lips don’t get dry] like a model getting ready for a picture.

 

I would take happy hair ties [ round but can turn into any shape] so my hair doesn’t get in my drink like my mum going in the cold plunge in the pool. 

Dragon poem

Scales

Its shining bumpy scales are

 as colourful as a rainbow on a sunny day.

 

Eyes

Its blood- red fiery eyes are 

as scary as the loch ness monster in the red sea.

 

Wings 

Its bluey,red wings are as

Cold as ice poles and hot as the blazing sun.

 

Horns

Its thick horns are as

Thick as an oak tree trunk on a chill summer evening.

 

Talon 

Its talon is sharp as sharp as

Claws dragging down the clipboard.

 

Spine

Its boney spine are as

Boney as skinny twigs snapping its core empty so shallow.

 

Jaws

Its jaw so round just like a

Bouncy ball bouncing on the frosty winter floor.

 

Teeth

Its blood dripping teeth are as

Deadly as my best friend’s savageness when she gets hungry.

 

Tail

Its fluffy purple tail as fluffy as

My dogs bed when its just been in the wash.

 

The new teacher by Erin

As soon as sweet Miss Honey skipped into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn cheerful. She was small with a twinkle in her eye rather like a cute dog. ‘Settle down children,’ said the new teacher rather enthusiastically,’ Who’s ready to have some fun.

You are a dancer

You are a delicate  dancer, 

so graceful just like a butterfly flying in the wind.

 

You are a loud dance competition, dancers glaring at each other like eagles staring at their  prey.

 

You are a loving dance school, 

dancing together in sync like a pack of buffaloes travelling to find water.

 

You are a sparkly freestyle costume,

glimmering in the different coloured lights like a magpie with all its treasure. 

 

You are a happy hip hop dancer,

busting all of his moves like a lion trying to impress his guests.

 

You are a glittering ballet Costume,

the skirt swaying in the breeze like a bird flying in the forest.

 

You are a beaming ballet dancer,

spinning in her new dress just like a tornado grabbing all the things it can find.

 

You are a long dress, your topline so tight and fitted just like my mothers winter gloves.

 

You are dancing shoes,

tapping on the floor like a free range egg cracking open in the pan.

 

You are an all in one costume, 

with tassels running down your leg and gems sprinkling on your chest.

The Mystery

Charlie, who was a fifteen-year-old student, arrived at the forest (Woodway); it had been a hard, strenuous journey. Placing his bike on a nearby tree, Charlie saw three things: the waves crashing relentlessly against the rough rock; a daunting figure walking in the depths of the forest and the ice-cold rain hitting the windows of a neglected log cabin. Where will he start looking for his missing friend? There was a rustling sound coming from a bush… and a bizarre creature jumped out. What will Charlie do next?

Sentences

While the snow fell, Tom waited in his flat. The phone wrang so he picked it up. Listening to the phone, he crossed the room to pick up his suitcase. After a while, he opened the door and went outside.

Before I played my music very loudly, it was silent.

As I ate my breakfast, there was a bad smell.

Whenever I played my trombone, there was an odd sound.

Although it was snowing, I wore a shirt.

In case there was no one there, I took my time.

Whenever there was a snake there, it was scary.

After I fed the shark, it was silent.

Since there was a snake there, I gave the frog a helping hand.

 

Phrases and Clauses

Bob ran down the road.
He fell over.

Bob fell over because he ran to fast down the road.

The thunder roared.
The hobbits hid.

The hobbits were alarmed as the thunder roared, so they hid.

Bilbo slept in a cave.
The goblins attacked.

Not knowing what was happening, Bilbo slept in a cave while the evil goblins attacked.

The cart came to a wheezing halt.
Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

The cart came wheezing to a halt  as Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

Jim was interested in the idea.
He rang his friend.

Jim rang his friend because he was interested in the idea.

Owls are nocturnal.
This means they are active at night.
They have excellent eyesight.

Due to owls having excellent eyesight, they are active at night since they are nocturnal

Phrases and Clauses

Bob ran down the road.
He fell over.

Bob fell over because he ran to fast down the road.

The thunder roared.
The hobbits hid.

The hobbits were alarmed as the thunder roared, so they hid.

Bilbo slept in a cave.
The goblins attacked.

Not knowing what was happening, Bilbo slept in a cave while the evil goblins attacked.

The cart came to a wheezing halt.
Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

The cart came wheezing to a halt  as Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

Jim was interested in the idea.
He rang his friend.

Jim rang his friend because he was interested in the idea.

Owls are nocturnal.
This means they are active at night.
They have excellent eyesight.

Due to owls having excellent eyesight, they are active at night since they are nocturnal