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Leen-Hallsville

One night a storm dashed through (London) the city. The storm was hiting the sea very hard the storm came with rain so evryone who was out side go splashed with rain and sea water. Evryone was screming for help. (That other people couldent sleep)some people were looking out of the window wondering what is  going on. Some people were just trying to sleep because they have work.Also some people were looking out of the window but they worn’t looking at the people sufiring  they were not looking at the sea or the rain they were looking at the funderstrom.

I had work tomorow so i hat to sleep but all i could hear is

“AHHAHHAHHAHHAHHAHH”.

The mysterious ocean

As a tsunami rushed through the ocean ,3 mysterious creatures looped up into the grey air:a one eyed squid racing through the dull water’s;a four headed shark (which looks terrifying) had eyes gleaming through the water hunting for it’s prey.The tsunami dashed through the ocean:it killed everything in it’s path  non-stop.The shark looked incredible withe emerald looking teeth ,crystal looking eyes that glimmered in  the dark.Then after hours of horrendous disaster it stopped and let go.

 

 

The Ghost Hunt

Me and my friends, that loved scary tales, went out for a ghost hunt. As we stepped outside, the rain lashed and whipped as the wind howled like the wolves at night. SQUAWK!… it was just a black crow. The rain showered down on us; my friends loved the terror but I was quite nervous. While we entered the forest, that was haunted, the owls chirped and we left a trail of footsteps on the muddy path. All I could see was the pitch black darkness of the night. WHOOSH….. “AAAARRGGHHH!!!!” I screamed, beads of sweat forming on my forehead. By the time I realised my friends were laughing I knew they created a prank; they explained that it was just the wind. I was: terrified, petrified, nervous and suspicious that my friends were doing it on purpose. Soon, the rain came to an end and stopped whipping on our faces when we heard some howling – wolves… those are wolves – I repeated in my head. I ran like the wind and hid under a tree. Another prank! I thought as my friends came to me cackling and laughing their heads off while I frowned. Suddenly, we heard some grunts and breathing when…

Sussy sea

As the storm raged the ocean, 3 sea animals were thrown out of balance: a weird looking turtle that was trying to hand on the coral reef; a shark that was spinning non-stop; an octopus swaying through the sand. The tsunami raged; it destroyed everything in its path. A turtle, who was hanging on the reef, had enough. The turtle was unique, it had emerald-green eyes, amber-orange skin and a scarlet-red shell. Suddenly, it let go…

The boy who saved his town

In the gloomy,burning volcano John stood bravely . The vocano rumbled as lava spit out he knew he had to take drastic action to save his town from this catastrophic disaster.He ordered to make defence as he dashed away.A few hours later the vocano erupted sending stones damaging buildings as the lava past defence. Then he had an idea. He sended planes droped the nukes at the ocean making a huge bang sending a tital wave . The  residents all ran to the safe house and hid as the freezing ocean water turned the vocano into stone . His town was saved and got more stone they fixed the houses and everything was right again.

 

 

 

The vigorous storm.

The girl entered as she felt gusts of frosty air hit her. When she scanned her surroundings she saw:the sky shrouded with mist, the rain falling heavily and the storm booming. She felt her fingertips turning moist; shivers ran down her spine.The water came gushing down like a waterfall. The merciless winds,which caused the enormous waves to crash, erupted like lava coming down from a raging volcano. It split like an aggressive wild animal, angered by the vigorous storm.

Rosie-hallsville

Rain dropped very fast: There was no sunshine so it was very boring so to start of with this suspense story,the beach water had waves coming through the water and the waves would not stop, and the rain poured as if a storm was coming and even if a storm came,it could be dangerous and could make u sick.The seagulls didnt look normal and they didn’t sound normal. The seagulls kept bitting people every time they fed the poor animals.The seagulls could be haunted.

The gloomy path

The tourist heard a new place that he hasn’t explored. Firstly he packed his bags : camera; record anything, food; so he doesn’t starve water; if hes thirsty and most importantly, his phone for help. It was time to go. It wasn’t to far from him (90 km away) from home. Suddenly, it started raining hail. He had to take cover otherwise he will get bruised.But he didn’t care. The hail slashed left and right but the tourist’s braveness was amazing. His feet (which were cut) moved forward non-stop . At last, he has achieved his goal. Out of the blue, he heard a child’s scream… It was now time to skyrocket out of this place. He will never go back there again.

David’s Amazing Suspense Story

Water and mud swept across the sandy shore; rocks clattered upon each other and rain smashed the bumpy surface. Maybe something happened underneath the sea… who knows? Should we investigate? Or is it too dangerous? The beach was dreary and the atmosphere, which was filled with deep black clouds, was gloomy. Deep inside the questioning sea, unthinkable things happened; the thunder and lightning clashed together. The nighttime appearance of celestial objects like stars, planets, The Moon, which were visible in the bleak aura between sunset and sunrise, shun eerily. The Moon, a glowing white star, was surrounded by an ethereal glow.

Albie

In a dark lake with rain, poring down as fast as a jet lived unseen animals.The animals might be Sharks or maybe Anglarfishes but we don’t know what is under the surface of the sea .There might be treasure or dead bodys’ but who knows maybe a whale or every fish it might be abandoned  or creepy but who knows?