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Session 8 using conjunctions ,cohesions and determiners

Early one morning, Polly went for a walk.At that the moment Polly wanted to collect shells.To her amazement Polly  saw a poor girl who lived next to the beach where she found beautiful flat shells ,curved coloured shells.

 

 Carefully, Polly   bent down to pick up the shell and  the shell spoke! “I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely”  . Luckily ,Polly found the most beautiful shell she had ever seen lying next to a rock pool glistening in the sun. 

Tenses

Something was crawling up the side of the sky ship’s wooden hull. Ty, whose face paled, shrank back and ducked down behind the tiller but Marina rushed to the edge and peered down at the gloom below her. She could just make out something or somebody scramble up the side of the ship. It was quite small and had green eyes. It paused and stared back up at her, “It’s a baby dragon!” she called, “And it’s hurt!” Marina  whose brow frowned with concentration , reached  down to grip its outstretched paws and pulled it onto the deck ,” It was hurt in the storm” 

 

The dragonlet shivered with cold and whimpered Ty  , dashed off to fetch a ship’s blanket; he wondered anxiously if the dragonlets mother was pleased that they helped her baby . Marina spoke calmly to the baby , hoping that Captain o,shea  wouldn’t take a dim view of what they did .

tenses

Something was crawling up the side of the sky ship’s wooden hull . ty, whose face was palled , shrinked back and ducked down behind the tiller but Marina rushed to the edge and peered down at the gloom  below her . she could just make out something or somebody scrambled up the side of the ship . it was quite small and had green eyes . it paused and stared back up at her “ its a baby dragon”! She called “and it hurt “!  . marina  whose brow frowned with concentration ,  reached  down to grip its outstretched paws and pulled it onto the deck , it was hurt in the storm 

 

The dragonlet shivered with cold and whimpered , off to fetch a ship’s blanket he wondered anxiously if the dragonlets mother was pleased that they helped her baby . marina spoke calmly to the baby , hoping that captain o,shea  wouldn’t take a dim view of what they did

Multi clause sentences

In the morning , the teacher stopped at the shop , picked up the books quickly and ran to her car angrily holding her crips .

 

At 2.00 , the car accelerated at the police station ,drove around the corner speedily, came to a halt letting out a sigh .

 

At the crack of dawn , the dragon landed on the street,crawled towards the school fearlessly and paused staring into the classroom .

 

At midnight , the starship hovered over  the earth and aimed its laser beams tightly and fired them to earth . 

Spag

The snow fell while Tom waited .  He was in the flat when the phone rang so he picked it up while listening  . Tom crossed the room and picked up the  suitcase . He opened  the door before stepping outside . 

 

I ate my breakfast although it was snowing .

I took my time in case it was silent .

I played my trombone when it was scary.

I gave the frog a helping hand as there was a snake there .

I played my music very loudly since there was no one there. 

I fed the shark after there was an odd sound .

 I bought a gas mask before it was a strange request .

I wore a shirt whenever there was a bad smell . 

 

conjuntions

Bob ran down the hill , after he fell over. 

 

The thunder roared , as the hobbits hid .

 

Bilbo slept in as the goblins attacked . 

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt ,when gandalf strode into the hobbit hole . 

Bob ran down the hill , after he fell over. 

 

The thunder roared , as the hobbits hid .

 

Bilbo slept in as the goblins attacked . 

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt ,when gandalf strode into the hobbit hole . 

Bob ran down the hill , after he fell over. 

 

The thunder roared , as the hobbits hid .

 

Bilbo slept in as the goblins attacked . 

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt ,when gandalf strode into the hobbit hole . 

 

Jim was interested in the idea , since he rang his friend .

 

Owls are nocturnal white ,  while this means the are active at night and have excellent eyesight .

 

Jim was interested in the idea , since he rang his friend .

 

Owls are nocturnal white ,  while this means the are active at night and have excellent eyesight .

 

Jim was interested in the idea , since he rang his friend .

 

Owls are nocturnal white ,  while this means the are active at night and have excellent eyesight .

 

A tree is . . .

A tree is… 

A tree is  

as still as a motionless animal, 

like a painted object. 

Nature-binder. 

 

A mountain is 

as tall as a towering skyscraper, 

like heather city. 

Snow-topped. 

 

A dictionary is  

as smart as a brain, 

like word heaven. 

Definition bonded. 

 

A coat is 

as waterproof as a leaf, 

like hooded rain. 

Warm fires. 

A computer is 

as annoying as dust, 

Like an infuriating machine. 

Irritating tech. 

The Ship of Darkness

The Ship of Darkness  

Eternal darkness screams through the deck. 

Portholes slowly getting fainter and fainter. 

The mast dissolves as the clouds go grey. 

Waves bashing, slowly making small dents in the sides. 

The wheel rapidly losing control. 

Rocks stretching hard hands out, trying to grab hold. 

Death following, graves haunting. 

Comets striking dealing deathly blows. 

Silver moonlight shining down like a projector. 

As the ship of darkness sails towards the light.   

Chapter 3

Furiously, Taylor screamed, “Why can’t you just help?”

 

“It’s no use, we’re trapped. I hate your  mum’s old co-worker,” said  Zoe.


“Yes, but you are not even trying to get out,” said Taylor with her arms crossed. 

 

Just as Zoe was falling asleep, she heard a soft knock on the window. Looking out, she saw Betty’s bright blue eyes. She quickly opened the window, “Let me in, I need more wind ups,” purred Betty. Zoe reached her arm out of the window and gave her some wind ups using the key between her shoulder blades.  

 

When Betty had more wind ups, she opened her small mouth and dropped an old, brown key.  Zoe quickly opened her hands. “I want out of here,” said Zoe . 

 

Softly, Zoe turned the key but it seemed to not work until there was a click and the door opened with a creak. “We’re free! We’re free!” said Zoe excitedly as the girls ran out the door and onto the field of grass without hesitation. They ran all the way across to the old stone wall. Betty leading the way. 

The popdrop

The Popdrop 

 

The neat, neon red Popdrop, exploding violently like a volcano in the night sky.

 

The petals are thin and delicate like soft , soothing  blankets mindfully blowing in the wind.

 

The bright, soft yellow pollen was like sugar being carried by the hot ,howling  wind .

 

The strong, powerful stem is like snake skin holding up the pretty, colourful flower.

 

The deep, dirty roots like spider legs gripping on to the dirty ,crummy soil