Amy and Charlotte #
Nature
As the wind moves like the majestic sea
The trees sway like the river down the stream
The flowers are brightened when the sun comes out
The light is as bright as the sun
The moon shines like a silver ball
The grass sways as the wind howls
The leaves move as slowly as a snail
As the field sway in the light of the moon
Roots tangle like a bowl of noodles
I think nature is beyond beautiful in every way
Hello,
1.We think your way of writing was amazing.
2.Could you include less of the word “The”?
3.Try and improve some vocabulary.
Otherwise, your poem was fantastic,
from Esmee and Rowan.