My Poem of Various Things
You are a giant giraffe reaching to the sky.
You are Matilda reading piles of famous books.
You are like Saturday, snoozing until ten o’clock.
You are the taste of a crunchy caramel bar and the taste of little drops of Heaven.
You are a mischievous monkey, munching bananas from a tree.
1) I liked the alliteration ‘mischievous monkey’.
2) Do you need a full stop at the end of every sentence?
3) I think you should describe the giraffe more