I think your poem is really good.
Mabey you could add so more next time.
keep using your caps lock on the first letters of each line.
I love the glasses maybe describe them.
I like how you did it about a science .
You could have done a different word for circle.
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I like the circle glasses as I can see them in my mind.
Don’t forget your punctuation!
Hi I like the part where it said “You are as smart as a scientist in school.”
I think your poem is really good.
Mabey you could add so more next time.
keep using your caps lock on the first letters of each line.
I love the glasses maybe describe them.
I like how you did it about a science .
You could have done a different word for circle.