4 Responses to “You are…”

  1. I like the circle glasses as I can see them in my mind.
    Don’t forget your punctuation!

  2. Hi I like the part where it said “You are as smart as a scientist in school.”

  3. I think your poem is really good.
    Mabey you could add so more next time.
    keep using your caps lock on the first letters of each line.
    I love the glasses maybe describe them.

  4. Olivia and Betsy October 1, 2020 at 10:57 am

    I like how you did it about a science .
    You could have done a different word for circle.

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