You are
You are a shiny falling star
coming down to bring happiness all over us.
You are a blood thirsty python
ready to attack your prey
with your venom.
You are a shiny falling star
coming down to bring happiness all over us.
You are a blood thirsty python
ready to attack your prey
with your venom.
That 2nd ones a bit creepy!😱
I don’t think pithons have venom? I think it’s vipers.
How about you put some more verses.
Nice poem 😊
How did you get those ideas
When writing a poem every verse goes together instead of the verses being septet.
1. I really liked the blood thirsty Python.
2.why go with a python?
3. Maybe on the last verse you should say where the he is.