After the bus stopped, the ferocious storm blew across the road. Even though the old man staggered, he managed to make it home safely to his house. While he was sitting down at his table, he was also waiting for them to arrive.
Sentences
While the freezing snow fell, Tom waited inside his flat. The phone rang, so he picked it up. He listened. He crossed the room to get his suitcase. Finally, he opened the door and went outside.
After I bought a gas mask, it was silent.
Before I wore a shirt, there was a bad smell.
Although I ate my breakfast, it was scary.
Before I fed the shark, there was a bed smell.
Whenever I feed the shark, there was an odd sound.
After I played my trombone, it was silent.
As it was a strange request, I played my music very loudly.
After I gave the frog a helping hand, there was a snake.
Phrases and Clauses
Bob ran down the road.
He fell over.
Bob, who ran down the road, fell.
The thunder roared.
The hobbits hid.
As the thunder roared, the Hobbits hid.
Bilbo slept in a cave.
The goblins attacked.
The goblins attacked Bilbo, who was sleeping In a cave.
The cart came to a wheezing halt.
Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.
After the cart came to a wheezing halt, Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.
Jim was interested in the idea.
He rang his friend.
Jim, who was interested in the idea, rang his friend.
Owls are nocturnal.
This means they are active at night.
They have excellent eyesight.
Owls, which have excellent eyesight, are nocturnal and this means they are active at night.
Ronaldo scored a goal.
The crowd went wild.
Inside out
Outside, the heavy, thick snow fell onto the lonely city. Inside, all the civilians were having some nice dinner with the fire warming them up.
Outside, the park was all frosted over so, the children couldn’t play. Inside the cabin, it was nice and warm and the people could make things.
Outside the classroom, the trees were blowing about in the violent thunderstorm. Inside, a fascinating movie was playing while the fire was burning and the children eating popcorn.
Outside, the Rain splattered onto the theme park. Inside, the heat from the heating steamed up the house.
Outside the football stadium, it was dark, cold and quiet. Inside, it was warm, loud and bright.
Moody-faced Joseph
As soon as moody-faced Joseph walked into his house, something looked strange. The room immediately appeared to turn pitch-black. It had been broken in by an unfamiliar criminal who is wanted by police. He immediately called the police. “I have just arrived back to my house from Ohio and it has been broke in by a criminal.” “The window has been smashed and I have had ten thousand pounds worth of jewellery robbed!”
chapter 4
Chapter 4
When Peter was at the Dark Lake, he was thinking about when he gets the magical magic crown. Peter looked at the magic map. He had to go to the Lava Lake where there was a bridge. When Peter was walking one of the planks fell so Peter fell. He was screaming for help but… Perter got up.
Peter went to the Never-Ending Forest. It was so dark Peter couldn’t see and tripped on something. He picked it up when he got out of the forest and looked at it. It was a big sword.
Peter found a boat so jumped in it. When he was paddling he couldn’t wait to get the magical magic crown if he could.
When Peter got to the magic island the waves were so bad his boat broke but he found another boat, so he had to go around to get to the dark castle.
Peter got the dark castle. The Gorms were attacking him. He remembered he had a sword, so he was fighting them.
Peter got the crown. There was a plane, so he flew the plane back to Carcass and he gave the crown back to the king. Peter was so happy to return the crown.
Kian p5 Oyne school
Come and visit our Fascinating Emporium
Come and visit our fascinating Emporium
Are your kids driving you insane at the weekend? Are your weekends boring? Do you want to see the seven wonders of the world? If so, why not visit us in the Emporium. We promise that you’ll be thrilled with all our wonders. But the best part about this experience is that it’s all completely FREE! Make sure that you bring along your imagination with you to the shop and experience your wildest dreams.
We hold things such as:
- The world’s biggest chocolate fountain
- Signed shirts from your favourite sports players or celebrities
- Books which let you draw in them and whatever you draw it will come to life!
If you do need perhaps time away from your family or want a day out but you can’t afford it, well just come right to us. Don’t be the only one to miss out on this once in a lifetime opportunity. Visit now and we will provide you the experience of:
- Anything in the world that you want/ can imagine
- Walking into rooms of your dreams
- Frequently created funky looking objects and creatures.
We promise that you will not regret visiting us and our amazing adventures and wonders. We hold the most famous book in all the world: The book of wonders!
Celebrities often say that our Emporium is the best shop they have ever visited.
We even got a comment from Cristiano Ronaldo!
“This shop is the best shop I’ve ever seen! It’s full of things to explore but when you think that it’s all over, more things open and appear!”
we have an abundance of great offers that you may consider.
- Kids go free
- Buy a specific thing get another for free
- If you enjoyed your first trip, then we offer you a membership for a year and for free and all you do is scan it across a barcode when you next come in you don’t pay a cent!
- Our opening times are Weekdays 9AM-7PM weekends 7AM-9PM.
- You can find us just off the M6, Charles Street, Wigan WN6 2KO
If you want, you can also email us at ExperienceEmporium@HotmailCo.Uk and our phone number 01942 593650. If you need you can book in by visiting our Email or ringing our number. We are waiting for you!
The Skin-Tearer
The Skin-Tearer
The Skin-Tearer is a newly discovered species of beetle. Found in Aruba, scientists say that it is one of the most harmful insects to ever roam the planet. Found in 2021, people often question and wonder how they’d be able to discover and find one of these insects. People have asked us many questions. “Will they have a special dot?” “Will they attack me?” “Do they hurt people?” Well I guess you have to read on to find out.
skin-Tearer appearance is lightning in their stomach ready to charge them up and run/go towards prey. Like most insects it has legs arms and wings but unlike most insects, it has around five-hundred and one legs and four hundred arms on each side so eight hundred arms! It also has sharp nails and toenails to really hurt animals. Its eyes are connected via two horns from its neck. Even though its small and looks harmless it’s illegal to carry around the animal as a pet and if any humans come too close to the animal its not scared to pounce and injure us. Scientists have said that it will fatally injure us and if we come in an encounter with it then to run away or trap it (This is a risky choice!) and if we do get bit then we should instantly call an ambulance!
Amazingly, The Skin-Tearer can also morph through walls and metal! They can make their bodies grow to the height of a T-Rex or grow as small as an ant! But there are also some good things about this animal, it can make the air clean, and scientists say this could be our key to stop climate change and pollution! So please don’t kill these animals unless they attack you first So BEWARE about this animal lurking around in Aruba!
By Kian H
The Haunted Emporium
Prologue
In a small unknown town, there stood a spooky shop in the middle of a village that is horribly haunted and never been visited before, the peculiar place is called the Haunted Emporium.
Even though when it’s the most haunted time of the year Halloween and all the pumpkins are lit up and the lights are up dangling with brightness over the shop. Even though the magical toys would try and beg you to come in you still look at the fascinating things. Even though you could smell the taste of fresh bread and the fresh chocolate that have just been made. Even though you heard the laughter from the tiny toys inside singing a song. Even though the displays were presented with beautiful sweets, toys, clothing and pencils. It has still never been visited by a human-being.
The Emporium had been stood there for 3 months and no-one has ever entered it that is until little Steven was walking home from school and saw the lights, even though his mum said don’t go in he was intrigued so he decided to disobey his mum and go in!
Chapter 1
Steven was always wondering what was inside the little shop. One rainy Friday evening, Steven was on his way home from school he stumbled across the shiny shop while walking down the slippery pavement, but she noticed something unusual about the Emporium, the door was opening with a sign saying come in come in we’ve got some toys, sweets and accessories. So, because Steven is a mischief maker and his mum told him not to go in, he disobeyed his mum and went in.
Everywhere he looked, it was all wonderous accessories and glistening things. he saw a bright yellow canary singing a song, golden and silver accessories like necklaces, bracelets and statues, a lot of hand painted clocks, shoes that bounce up and down 5 feet, a pencil and a notebook that has a special ability which is whatever you draw in the book with the pencil it comes to life, a bowl of sweets, bread and chocolate freshly made waiting to be eaten on the counter, a set of army figures that have several guns and are rotating and fighting on a battlefield, a fish tank with fake fish made on cardboard and have diamond pearls and emeralds on in not-so-wet water and books that have pages on pages of colouring arts from different famous artists.
Steven looks straight for more things but instead locks eyes with the shopkeeper ‘’I see you’ve wondered into my shop what could I get you today?’’ Steven looked in shock at the shopkeeper with a black Cat walking next to him. Steven stared at the cat and the shopkeeper said ‘’ Do you like my cat? She’s like my best friend.’’ Steven stared in amazement but suddenly the shopkeeper spoke out again ‘’ Could I interest you in some crazy comics perhaps if your nice I could give you one for free?’’ Steven instantly said ‘’Yes please!’’
By Kian Halliwell
The Haunted Emporium
Chapter 4 -Mission Impossible
Ignoring the annoying voice of the old woman calling him, Steve quickly ran out of the cottage and into the forest. He ran for what felt like hours, but it was only ten minutes. Steve was exhausted and eventually stumbled across an abandoned house. Without thinking, Steve instantly ran into the house.
As he got in there, he looked out of the window at the woman who was lost with a wolf. He managed to get away from them. Quietly, he shut the door so it’s not suspicious that he’s hiding in the house. Carefully, he sneaks around the house thinking that someone is there. As he gets on the second floor, he sees a man who says, “Hello young child, perhaps you’d like some biscuits?” Without hesitation and he’s only eight, he immediately said yes.
The strange, ugly man took Steve to the room with sweets. But little did Steve know that’d it’d turn out to be an escape room. The man who is called Jamal chucked Steve into the room and locked the door and spoke through a speaker and told him “The only way you’ll escape is if you complete 4 levels of horror and torture. You have 4 hours. Good luck!” Steve instantly started crying but he knew if he wanted to get home, he’d have to complete the escape room.
Jamal went on the speaker again “Oh and by the way the first level is: A room full of creepy crawlies and a key lies in the room get the key and you’ll move on to level two.” Steve instantly went to the first room and began searching. After twenty-five minutes, he finished the level with three hours and thirty-five minutes left and two spider bites.
“The second level is a room with a maze and lots of scary things, if you make it to the end, you’ll get to level three, and the last two levels are a surprise.” He ran to the door and opened it. The maze was huge. He was unsure if he’d get past it.
After one and a half hours, he completed it with two hours left for the last two. As Steve saw level three, he knew he couldn’t complete the level. He thought of an escape plan.
Jamal, who was eating and drinking downstairs waiting for the four hours to end and For Steve to get trapped in his house. Steve saw him eating downstairs, so he crept to the front door and quietly opened the door and then shut it. He was free. Finally free! But he wasn’t free yet, he still can see the old woman with the wolf Standing next to the exit. Steve knew he had to think of a plan to get her away from there. He saw a rock on the floor. He thought of a master plan to throw the rock as hard as he can on the floor and then the old woman would run where the rock dropped then instantly, he can run for the exit. He put his plan to work. He dropped the rock and saw the woman running with the wolf. He ran as fast as his little legs could go. Breathlessly, he made it to the exit.
He quickly had a look around and saw the woman staring straight at him. He ran through the door and back in the Emporium. “Well, hello again Steve! Did you find what you were looking for.” Said Ben “Well unfortunately I didn’t.” “Oh, what a disaster! But would you care to tell me what happened?” said Ben Bronze. “Well long story short, I got chased by an old woman with a wolf and then I got trapped in an escape room and I escaped and managed to sneak past the old woman.
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