The Sea by JackD
You are the sea singing,
You are the slithering snake,
You are the laptop loading,
You are the sound of a squeaking mouse.
You are the fire crackling,
You are in a dream but you can’t escape.
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1.We like how you used alliteration especially in the line about the laptop.
2.Could you expand,using further adjectives?
3.Maybe, you could add even more exciting adjectives.