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What I think of you.

You are a fog hanging in the air whilst trees tower over you.

You are as slow as a snail as quick as a lightning bolt and as quiet as a hedgehog hibernating.

You are a horrible box filled with disease, dreadful  thoughts and despair.

You are Medusa’s snakes as green as an emerald gemstone.

You are a drip of sweat as salty as the sea.

You are Malaria, the disease of miserable mosquitoes.

You are a sly sheep dog herding the sheep in the early morning.

You are a surfer surfing through the bright blue sky the clouds are your surfboard.

You are a football being kicked around as you run through the muddy fields.

10 Responses to “What I think of you.”

  1. I like the idea of the sweat dripping. I think its really creative and is a great poem.

  2. It was a really good powim

  3. I like the powerful description you used
    You could have done nothing better because it was amazing

  4. Isabella and Caleb October 1, 2020 at 10:29 am

    1.I loved how you said as quite as a hedgehog hibernating.2. Why did you chose animals to describe ?3.Next time try and not use animals .

  5. Kaiden and nyla October 1, 2020 at 10:29 am

    Wow brilliant I love the you are a football being kicked around as you run through the muddy fields!!

  6. I like it but you could make it more realistic.

  7. I liked when you said you are medusa’s snakes as green as an emerald gemstone

  8. layla and callum October 1, 2020 at 10:31 am

    i love that .that was very intresting i love the posoniforcation.

  9. I liked how you set it out.you could make it better by using a different slow animal .

  10. 1 wow I love that poem you are a fog haninging in the air whilst trees tower over you.
    2 you should improve your words there was not much thought it was amazing.

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