You are by Megan
You are an enchanting bell as yellow as the sun.
You are the bitter January,it is always like a block of ice.
You are an enjoyable,affectionate and friendly tortoise shell cat as lazy as a tortoise.
You are a very pleasant Monday the first day of a brilliant and dazzling week.
You are the delightful memory of my sweet granddad,when he used to make me cheerful and joyful when I was sad.
You are a silvery Mercury as grey as an old building.
You are a fascinating smell,of a glittery,showy and elegant.
You are the end of my delightful poem.
That’s really good Megan!
I loved the part where you said “You are the end of my delightful poem”
I don’t think you can improve anything Well Done!
I love the part where you said you are the end of my delightful poem next step check spelling.
thanks Evie I tried my best