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What are you? By Alfie

What are you?

You are  a lamp gracefully beaming onto the table.

You are an igloo wearing ice skates on a ice rink.

You are Harry Potter using your wand vigorously.

You are a toe  tipping tap dancing .

You are  a abandoned  umbrella  stuck into the ground on a deserted island you are surrounded by water.

You are the end.

3 Responses to “What are you? By Alfie”

  1. Reply
    Olivia October 1, 2020 at 10:29 am

    I like “You are a graceful lamp beaming onto the table”

  2. Reply
    Jonny October 1, 2020 at 10:31 am

    I like how you describe the lamp.
    Who is tipping tap dancing.
    Can you describe the table.

  3. Reply
    Fortnite October 22, 2020 at 10:23 am

    Good poem but try and extend it just a little bit.

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