What are you? By Alfie
What are you?
You are a lamp gracefully beaming onto the table.
You are an igloo wearing ice skates on a ice rink.
You are Harry Potter using your wand vigorously.
You are a toe tipping tap dancing .
You are a abandoned umbrella stuck into the ground on a deserted island you are surrounded by water.
You are the end.
I like “You are a graceful lamp beaming onto the table”
I like how you describe the lamp.
Who is tipping tap dancing.
Can you describe the table.
Good poem but try and extend it just a little bit.