What are you?By Jonny
What are you?
You are a shiny sun sparkling around the world for million of years.
You are the thought that starts each morning, conclusion to each day.
You are a green grass growing in the massive school field.
You are a blue sky like a shield protecting the round world.
You are a microscopic bubble trapping a tiny bit of air.
You are the end.
Very very good Jonny .
How did you think of these ideas Jonny?
Good job I think you could add a little more on you’re poem a part from that good job.
No yo are the end joony
Your post was really good
Maybe say something instead of “green grass”, make it more describing.
I like the second line.