Andi’s poem

You are a large golden apple sunken at the bottom of a boat rotting as the time goes by.

You are a bat hanging on an old tree trying to sleep as the kids play around you.

You are the taste of a brand new carrot crunching in the cute rabbit’s teeth.

You are the crisps in my bag waiting peacefully for playtime.

You are the cut grass in my garden trying to grow with the hot weather.

One Response to “Andi’s poem”

  1. Ellla and Harriet October 1, 2020 at 10:31 am

    1. I like the golden apple sunken at the bottom of a boat.
    2. Why was the apple in the boat?
    3. Maybe you could use a different word for “cute” rabbit.

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