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The angel of the dark

The angel of the dark.

Dancing and prancing around.

Looking down on us.

Dancing and prancing around.

Singing with joy.

Dancing and prancing around.

She hears a cats meow  and children playing.

Dancing and prancing around.

She sees a beautiful, bright sun.

Dancing and prancing around.

Singing “The angel of the dark.”

7 Responses to “The angel of the dark”

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    Cameron October 2, 2020 at 9:44 am

    I like your title the angel of the dark because it adds more mystery because angles are more bright then dark . Why did you choose the angel of the dark? Next time you could add more adjectives.

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    elliott October 2, 2020 at 10:13 am

    mysterious title! i like the repetition! maybe you could not do so much though.

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    Da'mya October 2, 2020 at 10:15 am

    That was a very impressive poem and the title is very deep and basically takes over the whole poem.

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    Aleksandra October 2, 2020 at 10:21 am

    I really like your poem especially the title it’s very catchy and quiet mysterious as you look at it and read it.

    Why was it ‘dark’ and also ‘angel’ as they are opposites?

    When you write the title, you could add ellipsis it makes it more catchy.

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    Liv October 2, 2020 at 10:21 am

    hi there, I’m liv, and i think your poem is great! I especially liked the idea of a dark angel because I am very into things like this. Why does the poem keep saying dancing and prancing around? I think you could make it a little bit longer, but other then that your poem is great and would love to see more poems from you! 🙂

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    Erin October 2, 2020 at 10:24 am

    1. I like the title because it makes me think of angles but there usualy bright so it has a good title
    2. Why did you use the title angles of the dark?
    3. I think you should try not to use so much repitition what do you think?

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    sophie October 2, 2020 at 10:29 am

    I like the fact you used allot of repitison
    why did you use dark angels ?
    mabe next time use les repitison

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