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3 Responses to “Rusty statue”

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    Ariela Hallsville Primary School (H) January 21, 2021 at 10:44 am

    I like your poem but it is too short so that is what you can improve.

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:52 am

    I think for you to make it better, you need to make it longer because it is very short

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    Anonymous January 22, 2021 at 2:30 pm

    I like the poem you did but to improve you could make your poem longer.

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