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I really like it. Can you improove it by adding more.
Something I like is the vocabulary you have used and something you could do to improve is add more sentences
What I like about your poem is that the vocabulary is really strong. Improvments: longer poem.
Grace (S) Hallsville
Something i like is that you described the bike.
Something i think you can improve is that make it longer because it is too short.